You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and Give your reason for writing Tell about your education Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job.

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Walker Starbucks, Downtown Toronto I recently came across your poster regarding an opening for the post of Quality Assurance Manager at your Downtown store. I am writing to you in order to express my interest in the position. I'm a Business Administration major at Loren Brusque University in York. In my opinion, my university education makes me an ideal candidate for the job. Not only did I score well on subjects

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as "Product Quality Management" and "Restaurant Management"

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helped

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set up

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a successful temporary coffee shop

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my campus. I worked on that project in my

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year as part of a team. We came up with a business plan, new coffee-based drinks, and developed those drinks in-house. I was in charge of procuring the best quality ingredients at the cheapest cost. On our very

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day, we were completely sold out. I have

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worked at one of your stores before. During summer break 2018, I was a part-time barista at Starbucks' York location. In that time, I developed a fair understanding of the inner workings of that store. I

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maintained an excellent record

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of the month in my

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month there. For your reference, my employee ID was AB8167B and my manager was

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John Smith. Overall, considering my experience as a student as well as an ex-Starbucks employee, I think I would be a good fit. I'm a quick learner, and what I haven't picked up so far, I'm more than happy to learn on the job. I hope you consider me for the position. Looking forward to a positive response. Regards, Abhay Singh