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You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and Give your reason for writing Tell about your education Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job.

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 Walker Starbucks, Downtown Toronto I recently came across your poster regarding an opening for the post of Quality Assurance Manager at your Downtown store. I am writing to you in order to express my interest in the position. I'm a Business Administration major at Loren Brusque University in York. In my opinion, my university education makes me an ideal candidate for the job. Not only did I score well on subjects
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 my campus. I worked on that project in my
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 year as part of a team. We came up with a business plan, new coffee-based drinks, and developed those drinks in-house. I was in charge of procuring the best quality ingredients at the cheapest cost. On our very
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 worked at one of your stores before. During summer break 2018, I was a part-time barista at Starbucks' York location. In that time, I developed a fair understanding of the inner workings of that store. I
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 month there. For your reference, my employee ID was AB8167B and my manager was
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 John Smith. Overall, considering my experience as a student as well as an ex-Starbucks employee, I think I would be a good fit. I'm a quick learner, and what I haven't picked up so far, I'm more than happy to learn on the job. I hope you consider me for the position. Looking forward to a positive response. Regards, Abhay Singh
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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