People doing dangerous sports activities like scuba diving and bungee jumping should be responsible for their own life and rescue workers should not risk their lives to save people doing those sports. Do you agree or disagree?

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Adventure sports have been on the rise in the recent times for people from the
millieneal
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millennial
generation. Sports activities like Scuba diving and bungee jumping even though very exciting, they come with their own dangers. I both agree as
wll
(often used as a combining form) in a good or proper or satisfactory manner or to a high standard ('good' is a nonstandard dialectal variant for 'well')
well
as well as disagree with
point
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the point
that people going for dangerous
activties
any specific behavior
activities
should be
responsuble
worthy of or requiring responsibility or trust; or held accountable
responsible
for their own
life
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and will discuss the same in
this
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essay. Taking the
responsibilty
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
responsibilities
away from the
person
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and placing it in the hands of a
rescue
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worker
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can lead to a higher risk taking mentality for an individual. So a
person
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who is not fully fit or
trained
someone who is being trained
trainee
may try to perform these high risk sports activities.
This
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risk taking behaviour would put the
life
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of the
rescue
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worker
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on
line
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the line
. If a have mishap is to occur, both the individual and the
recue
free from harm or evil
rescue
race
rice
workers
life
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and future would be in danger.
On the other hand
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, the
life
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of each and every individual is very
imporant
of great significance or value
important
and needs to be saved. The precise reason why governments and organizations have
rescue
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workers employed in the
first
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place and spend resources on training and placing them. So in case of an emergency the
rescue
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worker
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should be
upto
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up to
the task and save the
life
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of the
person
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endangered by a dangerous activity. In conclusion, the emphasis
of
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on
saving
lifes
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
should be with both the individual as well as the
rescue
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worker
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. An individual should be responsible and well prepared for these dangerous sports.
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A
rescue
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person
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should be ready for the task if there is any emergency.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inherent risk
  • assume full responsibility
  • acknowledging
  • engagement
  • unduly
  • voluntary risks
  • extreme sports enthusiasts
  • strict safety protocols
  • mandatory training
  • mitigate
  • thrill
  • personal satisfaction
  • endangering
  • rescue personnel
  • drain public resources
  • divert emergency services
  • critical interventions
  • personal accountability
  • consequences
  • moral and practical burden
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