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Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects other people think that, in today would, subject like science and technology are the more important than history.

#people #history #school #subjects #science #technology
It seems
unusual but
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unusual, but
 true that school subjects in an inevitable factor in the present
senario
an outline or synopsis of a play (or, by extension, of a literary work)
scenario
, there has been ranging
debets
a discussion in which reasons are advanced for and against some proposition or proposal
debates
debuts
debits
 on
this
 concern, while some people believe that
history
 is beneficial, other opine that
science
 and
technology
 are more important
however
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 believe that both have positive and negative facts. It is widely felt and accepted
fact
Suggestion
the fact
 there are plentiful reasons why people say
science
 and
technology
 more important. Nowadays, people are doing more experiments to know about the
technology
 as advantages.
Firstly
, we can communicate with other countries with a high
technology it
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technology, it
help
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helps
 us to work and develop our country.
Moreover
,
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,
it
is definitely hold
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will definitely hold
is definitely held
definitely holds
 on to that hope in the near future, and
also
 economy can totally
achieved
Suggestion
achieve
.I know that
therefore
 a brighter future are waiting for all of us and
that is
 the reason why
science
 and
technology
 important.
On the other hand
 it can
also
 be argued that some changes have had negative impact on our
lives
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lives, for
for example
, when people are moving with the
science
,
technology
 some people say one of the most subject
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
history but
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history, but
 it has to go along with today would which is
science
 and
technology
, how can we move with out of
history
 people behind us "The ancient people " is the most powerful people who push us to move forward. It strikes me that we use
history
 to
lean
gain knowledge or skills
learn
 about others, the culture
thir
in or at that place
there
 traditional to be understand other more and more and
also
 it will help to move forward to each other to give a bright change and for everyone. To recapture, it is true that we must give a
chance especially
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chance, especially
 children
for
Suggestion
to
 study, to go to school and college to get a good knowledge so the
next
 ten years
however
, new
up coming
of the relatively near future
upcoming
 years all of them can help each other. To pass these chances to other children.

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