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What is the significance of spending a huge amount of money for

space

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research? Even though many argue that

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is for the benefits of the human, others think that

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can be better used for more pressing issues. In my opinion, I strongly support the latter’s view because

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research has

revolutionsied

fill with revolutionary ideas

revolutionised

various other fields that are extremely significant for the mankind. On the one hand, those who believe that governments fund can be channelized to resolve issues related to health, education and

infrastucture

the basic structure or features of a system or organization

infrastructure

. By financing these areas, would uplift

status

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the status

of the common people in the country. Eventually, they, tax payers, feel that their money better utilized.

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, most of the outer

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programs are launched to get either military dominance or spy on each other,

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can be unethical use of public fund, according to some.

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, it

is commonly point

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is commonly pointed

out that, only a fraction of money

sqanterring

spending resources lavishly and wastefully

squandering

for

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excavations, required to provide necessary facilities for the society.

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, despite the above mentioned argument, several people

belive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

believed

that, the

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excavation

bring

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brings

many advantages to the human, and I support

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concept. As the

man kind

all of the living human inhabitants of the earth

mankind

advatures

a wild and exciting undertaking (not necessarily lawful)

adventures

avatars

and explorations,

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, always has the tendency to upgrade something which

were dicoverd

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was discovered

were discovered

by the older generations. These studies have helped

advancement

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the advancement

of many other fields: communication, health, and defence;

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, medical imaging techniques, which we use today were

orginally

in an original manner

originally

developed for the outer

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study.

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, these advanced technologies

first

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used to analysis images of the moon which were captured by satellites.

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, under no circumstances not any individual can neglect the contributions of the

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research for human beings. By way of conclusion, while people are

differed

hold back to a later time

deferred

on funding a whooping amount investment for

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related excavations, I again reaffirm that

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definitely brought many positives to the mankind

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a large scale.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

314 words

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