In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What are the reasons for this? What in your opinion can be done about it?

What is the significance of spending a huge amount of money for
space
research? Even though many argue that
this
is for the benefits of the human, others think that
this
can be better used for more pressing issues. In my opinion, I strongly support the latter’s view because
this
research has
revolutionsied
fill with revolutionary ideas
revolutionised
various other fields that are extremely significant for the mankind. On the one hand, those who believe that governments fund can be channelized to resolve issues related to health, education and
infrastucture
the basic structure or features of a system or organization
infrastructure
. By financing these areas, would uplift
status
Suggestion
the status
of the common people in the country. Eventually, they, tax payers, feel that their money better utilized.
Additionally
, most of the outer
space
programs are launched to get either military dominance or spy on each other,
this
can be unethical use of public fund, according to some.
Finally
, it
is commonly point
Suggestion
is commonly pointed
out that, only a fraction of money
sqanterring
spending resources lavishly and wastefully
squandering
for
space
excavations, required to provide necessary facilities for the society.
On the other hand
, despite the above mentioned argument, several people
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
that, the
space
excavation
bring
Suggestion
brings
many advantages to the human, and I support
this
concept. As the
man kind
all of the living human inhabitants of the earth
mankind
like
advatures
a wild and exciting undertaking (not necessarily lawful)
adventures
avatars
and explorations,
additionally
, always has the tendency to upgrade something which
were dicoverd
Suggestion
was discovered
were discovered
by the older generations. These studies have helped
advancement
Suggestion
the advancement
of many other fields: communication, health, and defence;
for instance
, medical imaging techniques, which we use today were
orginally
in an original manner
originally
developed for the outer
space
study.
In other words
, these advanced technologies
first
used to analysis images of the moon which were captured by satellites.
Therefore
, under no circumstances not any individual can neglect the contributions of the
space
research for human beings. By way of conclusion, while people are
differed
hold back to a later time
deferred
on funding a whooping amount investment for
space
related excavations, I again reaffirm that
this
definitely brought many positives to the mankind
in
Suggestion
on
a large scale.
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