Scientists and the news media are presenting ever more evidence of climate change. Governments cannot be expected to solve this problem. It is the responsibility of individuals to change their lifestyle to prevent further damage. What are your views?

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few decades, climate change has affected the environment a lot more, than we expected. The newspapers and

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are releasing so many reports about climate change and the adverse effect on the ecosystem. The

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also suggest

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also suggests

some precaution and remedies that can reduce the effect of climate change and as a human everyone should take care of our earth.

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, some people claim that

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taking care of the environment is the

government

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's responsibility, not an individual's.

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this

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thought of those people are not acceptable one because whatever

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government done is

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government is done

for

citizen's benefit

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the citizen's benefit

. Even though the

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is doing

it's

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

best, some environmental scientist suggests that

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can do a lot more than what they have done during the

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few years.

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scientists

said that the

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should impose higher tax on vehicles and some factories because those

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taxes

induces the people to reduce their usage of motor vehicles.

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people in general

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should

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implement the stricter acts on pollution control.

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, people cannot sit back and watch, what

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do they

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do, they

should

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help the

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. At

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, individual should be asked some question by themselves,

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as what is

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are the members of

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? The answers

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questions

is individuals are

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government they

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government, they

are the members of it, so every person must contribute in movement, which held by

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. In conclusion, if we stand with the

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and obey the orders which was made by the

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, we could definitely save the environment. To make

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the good

the best

earth for future generation is the obligation of every individual

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Scientists and the news media are presenting ever more evidence of climate change. Governments cannot be expected to solve this problem. It is the responsibility of individuals to change their lifestyle to prevent further damage. What are your views?

Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Some people believe it is better to raise children in the city, while others consider the countryside to be a more suitable choice. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Some people think that the environment may be destroyed because of tourism. Others, however, believe that it is a way to preserve nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. !

In some societies the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. What are the reasons for this trend? And what possible solutions could reduce this issue?

Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.  Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. !