Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to have a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. What extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
believes
that sticking onto same
job
which they have been doing is a satisfying
career
life
while, few others think that shifting jobs are more fulfilling in a
career
life
. I agree
to
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with
the latter where people think that shifting
job
is much satisfying than doing
same
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the same job
job
. There are few people who
switch
their
job
more often which helps them to gain a good
career
growth
.
Moreover
to
a
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an
attian
a professional person authorized to practice law; conducts lawsuits or gives legal advice
attorney
a good
growth
it is possible only by when one is open to new
oppertunity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
.
Although
, now-a-days youngsters frequently
switch
their
job
because they always seek for a positive
growth
in their
carrier
the particular occupation for which you are trained
career
life
which can help them for a new better
job
and be the best they can.
Moreover
,
Accept space
,
changing jobs
can broadens
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can broaden
ones
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one's
one
horizone
the line at which the sky and Earth appear to meet
horizon
horizons
. As switching
job
will allow them to understand and learn new culture and different
statergies
an elaborate and systematic plan of action
strategies
which companies follow
at
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in
a unique manner at different
workplalce
a place where work is done
workplaces
.
Accept space
.
For instance
, people who
switch
from one company to another, have to accept that particular
statergies
an elaborate and systematic plan of action
strategies
and work style which the company follows. Learning and accepting new norms helps the individual to build up a positive
growth
in their
worklife
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work life
.
However
,
Accept space
,
I feel people who
does
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do
the same
job
end up having a stunted
growth
in their
career
life
as they are not aware
to
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of
the new tactics what new companies follows.
For example
, people who work with the same
job
might have many years of
experience but
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experience, but
they have limited knowledge
on
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of
the new tactics what other upcoming companies follow.
This
can not bring positive
growth
in their
career
life
. To conclude, people who
switch
jobs have a more
statisfying
providing abundant nourishment
satisfying
work
life
as it allows a
postive
characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.
positive
growth
in
career
and
broadens
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broaden
ones
Suggestion
one's
one
horizone
the line at which the sky and Earth appear to meet
horizon
horizons
.
Although
sticking to one
job
can bring a stunted
growth
than a positive
growth
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