You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work say what you want the shop or company to do

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Dear Sir or Madam I have just bought a high-speed internet subscription from your company, but there is a constant cut-off in the connection.

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, there is always disconnection in the middle of the day

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considered to be the peaking hours of my job.

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Furthermore

, the rate of the speed did not meet my criteria.

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, the

sale

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department of your company promised to supply me with

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a ten

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ten gigabyte

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internet connection while the actual rate is just under five

gigabyte

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. to be more precise it is 4.8.

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, as the majority of my jobs like issuing online insurance

policy

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for my customers and having

online

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an online

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conversation

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conversations

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with them to give

counsaltation

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consultation

consultations

about different kinds of insurances' criteria require high-speed connection, most of my tasks remain uncompleted, resulting in

continous

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continuous

complain from my clients about unsatisfactory services

the

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receive. So, I kindly request you to resolve my problem by either fixing the current

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internet

service

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replasing

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replacing

it with

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, which would sufficiently work without any

curruption

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corruption

. Mohammad Ebadi

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

173 words

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