some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in workplace. other think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful for employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?

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When focusing on the centre of the city, it can be seen that A new road l

aid,

put into a certain place or abstract location

lay

treching

act of expanding by lengthening or widening

stretching

from north to south. A new sets of houses i

s constructed

Suggestion

are constructed

in the north - east part of the city, which had replaced the old school by 2007. To the east of

this

Linking Words

ulding

a structure that has a roof and walls and stands more or less permanently in one place

building

bidding

pudding

is a temple which had been expanded and built a new car parking across the road.

However

Linking Words

, both swimming pool and fish market remain same without any changed throughout the period. Whereas in the southern part of the city, which used to be a forest, but it was chopped down to make a way f

oran

Suggestion

for a

for an

new airport.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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2
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

109 words

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Lifelong learning
Holistic development
Vocational training
Industry-specific competencies
Critical thinking
Creative problem-solving
Academic research
Intellectual development
Ethics and values
Societal contribution
Job market demands
Practical training
Internships
Knowledge advancement
Global challenges

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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All students should study a foreign language in school, starting in their earliest grades. To What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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