Nowadays people make new friends through social networks and internet chat groups. Some people think this is good. Other think that face-to-face interaction is essential. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

In the current

technologically

Suggestion

technological

advanced generation, people interacting and

chating

talk socially without exchanging too much information

chatting

with their new pals through several online mediums. Part of the society members

feels

Suggestion

feel

like it's good, but the other group of citizen's says face-face meetings are must. I agree with the opinion that meeting new people online would help building relationships and networking is faster and

good

Suggestion

better

This

Linking Words

essay would discuss both the views and concludes with the proper opinion.

Suggestion

the

first

Linking Words

place, meeting new people is very much easy through several

kind

Suggestion

kinds

of internet based mediums available on

world wide web network

Suggestion

the world wide web network

a world wide web network

For instance

Linking Words

, the social media channels like Facebook,

instagram

Suggestion

& Twitter are providing an open platform to the users to join their networks without any

hassels

an angry disturbance

hassles

Also

Linking Words

, the mediums are proactively helping with suggestions to invite strange users

who's

of which person?

whose

profiles based on interests are

matching

Suggestion

matched

. With

this

Linking Words

opportunity in

hand one

Accept comma addition

hand, one

can filter people that suits with their profile and can start interacting.

Moreover

Linking Words

, at any point of time we have an option of blocking the user if things are not going as expected.

Suggestion

the

second

Linking Words

place, in

person

Use synonyms

interation

a mutual or reciprocal action; interacting

interaction

with people to make friends has

it's

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

own advantages as it leverages each individual to take their relationship to

Linking Words

next level

Suggestion

the next level

to share things in

person

Use synonyms

For instance

Linking Words

, conversations happening in

person

Use synonyms

seems

Suggestion

seem

to be more realistic to understand the body language, facial expressions of the others to behave

accordingly

Linking Words

. In conclusion, internet mediums are the platforms to make the

freinds

a person you know well and regard with affection and trust

friends

in a lesser span of time.

However

Linking Words

, in

person

Use synonyms

meetings are like catalysts to improve the bond between people to make the relationship much stronger.

eshwar10882Sun Nov 10 2019

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

9
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

272 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6.5
band
As water is valuable resource, governments all over the world should control how much water their citizens use. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, we are living in abundance thanks to highly developed technology. While some insist that as resources are abundant enough in modern society, there is no need to restrict using water, I believe that governments around the world should control the amount of water their citizens use. Without restrictions, it will have negative effects on future generations and developing countries.
8.5
band
The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. Do you agree or disagree with this view?
The Internet has become increasingly prevalent in education. Many universities are now offering online courses instead of traditional classrooms. From my perspective, I would contend that any potential advantages of this off-campus learning are outweighed by its significant disadvantages.
7.5
band
It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?
Some people believe that teaching children at a young age to make differences between good and wrong acts is highly recommended, and punishment can be a good way to let them understand. I totally agree with this belief as unpleasant experiences can provide an effective way for children to know their boundaries.
7.5
band
Today more and more tourist are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctica. What are the advantages and disadvantages for tourist who visit such places.
Over the last two decades, tourism has grown at a higher rate on a global level. People are eager to visit places with extreme weather conditions, such as the Antarctica and Sahara desert. In my opinion, even though tourist attractions with severe weather circumstances have a plethora of advantages, this also negatively affects the global environment and human health.
6.5
band
Discuss your academic and non-academic achievements (for undergraduate and vocational student), and industrial experience (for vocational student only) including the process and skills involved in your previous or current degree program!
This mindset accompanies me whenever I want to explore and try something new. I achieved second place as an Exemplary Student of Universitas Pancasila, which can be seen as a result of my journey. Actively participating in volunteering since 2022 has developed my self-development skills. However, my turning back point happened in July 2023. At that time, Kompetisi Debat Mahasiswa Indonesia (KDMI) 2023 was opened, and I was intrigued to try new things. I almost gave up because I had never done a debate before. Armed with a mindset of “just try,” I successfully faced various changes until the final selection. I expanded the perspective that I never paid attention to and combined it with many possible aspects to build my motion’s argument. My critical thinking and decision-making were also developed due to the short time I had to build the argument.

Nowadays people make new friends through social networks and internet chat groups. Some people think this is good. Other think that face-to-face interaction is essential. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

As water is valuable resource, governments all over the world should control how much water their citizens use. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

Today more and more tourist are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctica. What are the advantages and disadvantages for tourist who visit such places.

Discuss your academic and non-academic achievements (for undergraduate and vocational student), and industrial experience (for vocational student only) including the process and skills involved in your previous or current degree program!