Nowadays people make new friends through social networks and internet chat groups. Some people think this is good. Others think that face-to-face interaction is essential. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

On the one hand, those who are believe making friends online has some negative impacts on the individuals point out that, as humans are social animals who require real life experiences than virtual reality.
In other words
, when a person meet many like minded online users, they tend to consider them as their real acquaintances, that may not be true in the most of the cases, due to the anonymity of the account holders.
Therefore
, they may be exploited by predators and online frauds. Online phishing,
for instance
, many social media users are manipulated and became the victim of
this
by other users on the same platform.
This
incidence would cause a huge negative
imapct
the striking of one body against another
impact
on their life: lack of trust, depression, and bankruptcy.
However
, neverthel
despite anything to the contrary (usually following a concession)
nevertheless
es the above mentioned viewpoint,
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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