completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. on the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. discuss both side and give your opinion.

Many people
believes
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believe
degree from a
university
is the essential requirement to set a better carrier, while
other
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the other
says
persuing
following in order to overtake or capture or as accompaniment to such pursuit
pursuing
Pershing
a valuable amount of
experience
improving personal skill is more vital. In my point of view, I believe that
university
education is
comparitively
in a relative manner; by comparison to something else
comparatively
competitively
important for a better
job
.
Firstly
, most of the people thinks that many years of
experience
and skill is the important component to get appointed in a higher designated
job
.
For example
, In our hospital,
pediatric
of or relating to the medical care of children
paediatric
Pediatric
department's
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department
head has only
minimal bachelor degree
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a minimal bachelor degree
in medicine with nearly 40 years of work
experience
. In
this
case she is heading the department, because she is experienced rather having multiple medical degrees.
However
, here I completely disagree with
this
viewpoint because it would
some times
on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
lack some
theoritical
concerned primarily with theories or hypotheses rather than practical considerations
theoretical
knowledge, which is actually the base for any kind of work. For the matter of fact, it is really difficult to conduct a system or to manage a work related issues only with
experience
or soft skills. Higher education from
an
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a
university
is the basic requirement for anyone to become a respectable profession. For Instant, I would like to restate the above example, though she is the head of the
deparment
a specialized division of a large organization
department
, she
always refer
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always refers
to her junior doctors for opinion or before any decisions made. She can only treat some common disorders, but her juniors who have a
university
degree in the same field can treat all
kind
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kinds
of illness, from acute to chronic. To conclude,
experience
and soft skills are certainly important.
However
, in my opinion, specialist knowledge is
necessay
absolutely essential
necessary
to apply for a
job
, only
then
it will be a satisfied and a successful
job
.

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