The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph represents the proportion of individuals
which
are living in urban Correct pronoun usage
who
areas
. The Use synonyms
grapch
depicts the evolution of the Correct your spelling
graph
porportion
during a 100 years Correct your spelling
proportion
study
, taken in 6 different Change preposition
of study
areas
of the globe, Use synonyms
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,
Africa, Asia, Europe, Latin America/Caribbean, North America and Oceania.
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Overall
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striking
evident an increasing tendency in Replace the word
strikingly
percentage
of Add an article
the percentage
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population
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the population
areas
, whilst some Use synonyms
areas
experienced Use synonyms
it
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apply
with
a steady or sharp Change preposition
apply
increase
.
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Firstly
, in 1950 Africa and Asia were the continents Linking Words
who
showed just 15% and 17%, respectively. Correct pronoun usage
which
Although
both have experienced a sharp Linking Words
increase
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by
almost 50% , both regions Change preposition
of
still
the ones with the Add a missing verb
are still
leasts
percentages.
Meanwhile, Latin Correct your spelling
least
American
/Caribbean Correct your spelling
America
have
experienced a sharp Change the verb form
has
increase
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of
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in
population
in urban Use synonyms
areas
. In 1950, the continent had less than 45% of Use synonyms
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population
living in cities, Add an article
the population
while
in 2050 is expected a percentage equal to 80%.
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Therefore
, in 2050 will be sharing Linking Words
the
first place, as a continent 89%-90% of Correct article usage
apply
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population
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the population
in
cities, with North America Add a missing verb
is in
who
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apply
testifyied
a steady Correct your spelling
testified
increase
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betwenn
1950 and 2050.
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between
Secondly
, Europe jumped to Linking Words
the
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apply
third
place Linking Words
while
experiencing a gradual Linking Words
increase
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by
33% of Change preposition
of
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population
in urban Add an article
the population
areas
.
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To sum up
, it is common to associate Linking Words
the
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apply
population
growth with their fixation in urban Use synonyms
areas
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Vocabulary: Replace the words areas, population, increase with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 5 times.
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