You recently bought an item of clothing from a shop. You discovered that it had a fault and returned it to the shop for replacement or refund. However, the assistant told you that this was against the store's policy. Write a letter to the store manager
Dear Mr Mallik,
This
letter is regarding the recent purchase I did in your store
and found a defect after coming home.So request your assistance for refund.
So, On last
weekend, I was in square one mall and found your store
“cloth Capital” very interesting as the items are cost effective
and durable. Add a hyphen
cost-effective
This
is the first
time I visited your store
.I liked a light blue shirt with a flower near pocket
and it attracted me. When I tried, It Add an article
the pocket
fit
well on me. Might be due to that the strain mark was unnoticed.
After coming home, I discovered Change the verb form
fits
this
strain mark inside of the shirt.Then
I went to your store
to return immediately. But sadly, that return of cloth is against store’s
policy.
Correct article usage
the store’s
This
was my first
time in the store
and while purchasing no one warn me about this
policy.I do have Correct article usage
a receipt
receipt
and tags hang on the shirt Fix the agreement mistake
receipts
also
as an
evidence of purchase. Kindly help me Correct article usage
apply
in
Change preposition
with
return
or refund policy.
Your’s faithfully,
Manaswini MishraCorrect article usage
the return
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