You recently bought an item of clothing from a shop. You discovered that it had a fault and returned it to the shop for replacement or refund. However, the assistant told you that this was against the store's policy. Write a letter to the store manager

Dear Mr Mallik,
This
letter is regarding the recent purchase I did in your
store
and found a defect after coming home.So request your assistance for refund. So, On
last
weekend, I was in square one mall and found your
store
“cloth Capital” very interesting as the items are
cost effective
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and durable.
This
is the
first
time I visited your
store
.I liked a light blue shirt with a flower near
pocket
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the pocket
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and it attracted me. When I tried, It
fit
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well on me. Might be due to that the strain mark was unnoticed. After coming home, I discovered
this
strain mark inside of the shirt.
Then
I went to your
store
to return immediately. But sadly, that return of cloth is against
store’s
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policy.
This
was my
first
time in the
store
and while purchasing no one warn me about
this
policy.I do have
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a receipt
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receipt
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and tags hang on the shirt
also
as
an
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evidence of purchase. Kindly help me
in
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return
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or refund policy. Your’s faithfully, Manaswini Mishra
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