The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
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The pie charts illustrate the
water
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percentage used in six regions of the world for various objectives like Industrial, Agricultural and Domestic
use
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.
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, in Africa, Central and South East
Asia
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and South
America
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, the
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consumption is more for agriculture,
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North
America
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and Europe utilize the highest percentage of
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for
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Industrial
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. In South
America
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, the
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of
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used for agriculture was 71%,
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North
America
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and Europe utilized 39% and 32% in agriculture.
However
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, the usage of
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for domestic
uses
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was less than 20% in all
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three countries.
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, for industrial
use
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the
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used was more in North
America
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and Europe with 48% and 53% each,
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in South
America
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it is only 10%.
On the other hand
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, the
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utilization in Africa, Central and South East
Asia
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is more than 80%,
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less than 10% of
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is put to
use
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for domestic purposes in these three places.
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, in
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Asia
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, 12% of
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is utilized for industrial uses,
while
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in Africa and Central
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Asia
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only 7% and 5% of
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is
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put to
use
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for industrial purposes.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, use, asia, america with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
  • variations
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