You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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Dear Sir, I am a student of "Business Management" a part-time in your institute. The main endeavour of writing

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letter is to inform you that I am unable to continue the course

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term due to my office work assignment. Please allow me to explain it briefly. I am doing

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job in Infosys in

city

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, Toronto but, recently my company has opened a new branch in Vancouver which is 200 km away from there. Due to

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, my company shifted some of the employees to that location and they promoted me

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to HR

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Manager there. So it is quite difficult to travel daily

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long

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distance

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, my job requires more work and time as well,

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, I want to hold

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subject for the

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session. I am gathering the information, whether I can move permanently to Toronto for

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future enhancement. So I will try to do my best to provide the justifications to my management to allow me to work from the current location. Somehow I wanted to complete the lectures for my carrier enhancement, so I am sure to travel back

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home and join the studies again.

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, my priority is to continue with my job to run my life without any interruption and concern my family too. I hope you understand my situation and I wish to join the course again in the upcoming term. So could you please adjust my current payment to the

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session if possible

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If it is not practicable for you

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refund my money. I look forward to

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from you.

Wed Nov 20 2019

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

265 words

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The Closing

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some people think that ambition is essential for success. To what extent, do you agree?

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.