You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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Dear Sir, I am a student of "Business Management" a part-time in your institute. The main endeavour of writing
this
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letter is to inform you that I am unable to continue the course
in
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this
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term due to my office work assignment. Please allow me to explain it briefly. I am doing
full-time
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a full-time

The noun phrase full-time job seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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job in Infosys in
city
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the city

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, Toronto but, recently my company has opened a new branch in Vancouver which is 200 km away from there. Due to
this
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, my company shifted some of the employees to that location and they promoted me
HR
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to HR

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Manager there. So it is quite difficult to travel daily
such
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long
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a long

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distance
Fix the agreement mistake
distances

It seems that distance may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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.
Moreover
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, my job requires more work and time as well,
therefore
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, I want to hold
this
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subject for the
next
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session. I am gathering the information, whether I can move permanently to Toronto for
the
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apply

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future enhancement. So I will try to do my best to provide the justifications to my management to allow me to work from the current location. Somehow I wanted to complete the lectures for my carrier enhancement, so I am sure to travel back
to
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home and join the studies again.
However
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, my priority is to continue with my job to run my life without any interruption and concern my family too. I hope you understand my situation and I wish to join the course again in the upcoming term. So could you please adjust my current payment to the
next
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

session if possible
.
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?

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If it is not practicable for you
then
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refund my money. I look forward to
hear
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hearing

The verb hear is usually in the gerund form when following the word look forward to. Consider replacing it with the -ing form.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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