It has been observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subjects at University. What do you think are the causes of the problem?what are the effects on society?

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It is suggested that nowadays in many nations students give less preference to
science
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subject for their tertiary education.
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problem
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is mainly caused by two reasons and it would hinder the economic growth of
society
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. In the upcoming paragraphs, I intend to put forth my arguments related to my view and suggest its effects on
society
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. On the one hand, interest of students towards choosing
science
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subjects at University level becomes less popular because pursue study from
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stream is
become
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becoming
more expensive and
their
in or at that place
there
are some students who belongs to conservative families and their family budget does not allow them to choose
these subject
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this subject
these subjects
.
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, sometimes in many universities they
focusing
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focus
are focusing
are focussing
on only theatrical concepts and do not provide facilities related to practical work which is very important in it.
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, my cousin brother who choose
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subjects for his
further
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education but
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education, but
he faces many problems during his study because his university does not provide material for practical work and when he applied for job he does not get it because of his lack of knowledge and he got
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motivated after that failure because these studies needed more hard work but sometimes not give proper satisfaction in future because developed countries provide best curriculum to students which make them sophisticated adult and more capable to compete with others.
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, that
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has a cast an adverse effect on our
society
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because if the interest towards
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lasts
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it would become a hinder in development of a nation because every country needs students who have in-depth knowledge in scientific concepts for doing
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researches which is useful for nation to get name and fame and get profit which they will utilize in other activities for fruitful growth of a
society
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and
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if
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sector is lost the Unemployment is
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increase because interest towards other subjects impose burden on
society
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and people will have lack of Job opportunities and nowadays the need of people
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increased and in order to meet them they choose some negative paths which ruin their career and makes the situation worse in societies. In conclusion, these days in many countries students are not interested in
science
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subjects for their
further
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education because of lack of material and expenses and that
problem
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affects the whole
society
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because if that sector lost the main
problem
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of unemployment will increase.
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