You share your room with another student in the college hostel. You find it very difficult to study there because he or she always has parties and friends visiting.Write a letter to the hostel warden complaining about your displeasure with the room mate.

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Dear Warden,

This

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is John,a student from your university pursuing

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computer science. My enrollment number is 2231 I am writing you

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letter to report

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about my roommate who has been a

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for me

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a long time. We are currently accommodated by

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Downtown

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residential campus. Its been always a trouble accompanying

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of the unwanted disturbance he creates. He has a habit of calling his friends to our room and making it a mess by turning it to like a club by increasing the volume from his speakers to

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unbearable level. They use it for playing cards all

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evening and watching Netflix without turning off the television even in the mid-nights. He always

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partying with his friends without missing a single weekend and making the environment very unfriendly. I have tried to warn him many times and I have informed his parents about

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, but they couldn't take any action on him.

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very hard to concentrate on my academics and I am very much worried about my grades as well in the coming examination. Hope you have

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the situation. Take necessary action as earliest as possible helping me out by either shifting him or me to another room. Thanks, John.

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hostel warden
cohabitation
disruptive behavior
communal living
academic performance
conducive to studying
nocturnal activities
amicable resolution
accommodation request
policy enforcement
distraction
sleep deprivation
noise level
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You share your room with another student in the college hostel. You find it very difficult to study there because he or she always has parties and friends visiting.Write a letter to the hostel warden complaining about your displeasure with the room mate.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Numerous animal species worldwide are currently facing extinction. Some argue that countries and individuals should prioritize protecting these animals, while others believe resources should be focused more on human issues. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railwaw lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the past, people stored knowledge in books. Nowadays people store knowledge on the internet. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Many people believe that the high levels of violence in films today are causing serious social problems. What are these problems and how can they be solved?

Some people believe that in order to give opportunities to new generation companies should encourage high level employess who are older than 55 to retire. Do you agree or disagree? Why.