You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter -advising them of your situation. -explain how this is affecting you. -request a new card.

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Dear Sir, My name is Manpreet Kaur and I am a student of commerce department in your institute. I am writing

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letter to request you please issue a new identification card. Please allow me to explain my situation. A Couple of days before I had lost my photo ID.

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Friday when I was travelling by train after finishing my Wallet. I did not realize that time because the train was overcrowded. When I have at home,

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I noticed that my wallet has some money and a school card that was not with me. I tried hard to find my student ID Card,

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, all effort was useless. It created some

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for me because school annual exams will be started in a few days and it is essential to carry an identification along with roll number slip. Without having it, I could not appear in examinations. So, I request you Please issue a new student ID, so that I can give my exam. I promise you that I will take care of it hereafter. Thank you in advance. I hope that you will solve my problem as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Manpreet Kaur

Thu Nov 21 2019

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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