Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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believe that the Suggestion
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customer
is the main key Suggestion
customers
a customer
the customer
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opinion
which support Suggestion
opinions
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and Use synonyms
serves
.
be used by; as of a utility
service
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of all, the good looking in Linking Words
dress
can make many people believe to Use synonyms
product
which is sold in their companies. The Use synonyms
first
impression is important to interest Linking Words
buyer
. Suggestion
a buyer
buyers
the buyer
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to
their eyes than their ear. Suggestion
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wants
buy
a Suggestion
to buy
product
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store
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store
and handsome or beauty sales. They are more Use synonyms
interest
to hear Suggestion
interesting
explanation
from good Suggestion
an explanation
the explanation
explanations
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company
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the seller
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and bad Use synonyms
product
.
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Secondly
, the Linking Words
quality
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serves
and products is the main key to determine of successful business. People will be used by; as of a utility
service
rebuy
the pay back
repay
product
if institutions give good service and Use synonyms
quality
of Use synonyms
product
. Use synonyms
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still needs
good
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. Use synonyms
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to go
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with Use synonyms
dressed
smartly employees to Suggestion
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store
with bad Use synonyms
dress
workers.
To summarize, I Use synonyms
am not absolutely agree
to both opinions, but I have combination opinion between workers with Suggestion
do not absolutely agree
dressed
smartly and Suggestion
dressing
quality
service is the main key. I suggest to clever dressed employees and still good Use synonyms
quality
in service and Use synonyms
product
. It will make our business defend from bankrupt.Use synonyms
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