Q. Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some would
thought
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think
that getting a
university
degree
is enough for a good
job
while others might
thought
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think
of adding some prior experience and soft skills before joining a
job
.
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.
In my view
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,
both getting a
degree
and a range of skills and experience be both beneficial to promote good jobs. On the one hand
,
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,
completing a
university
education whether
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education, whether
a
expresses position, direction or location, or point in time
at
undergraduate or a postgraduate
degree
is a
prerequiste
something that is required in advance
prerequisite
step before entering a
job
workforce
.
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.
Universities
now adays
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now days
nowadays
has 4 years bachelors
degree
and 2 to 3
years
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year
masters
degree
in different disciplines
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.
So
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a required number of credit hours has to be completed by the student to complete the
university
requirement
.
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A
university
student is expected to gain
a
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an
insight knowledge
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insight, knowledge
as taught in a semester/
yearly
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year
system comprising of different courses as per the
choosen
one who is the object of choice; who is given preference
chosen
chasing
field
.
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.
For instance
,
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An electrical engineering student is expected to have a strong background in Electronics
,
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,
Electrical Machines and different power systems courses.
On the other hand
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one should be
expecting
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expected
to have proper internships and
oppurtunities
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
opportunity
to have some practical knowledge of whatever they have learned in the
university
.
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.
One could somehow have more and more online courses under their belt to support their applications before applying for a
job
. In conclusion
,
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,
while getting a
university
degree
is a vital step to show the world what you have
acheived
to gain with effort
achieved
,
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,
I believe that one has to have some practical
knowlege
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
and exposure to
this
ever-developing world.
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