The world population is been increasing lately. One way to curb excessive growth in third world countries is to restrict the number of children each couple can have to 1. Other people believe that empowerment of the women is a better way. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

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World population is one of the extreme conditions that our Earth is suffering from, pollution, corruption, natural calamities

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something which we know is wrong and cannot be controlled the way we want to but given birth to a new individual is both a goodwill and a curse at the same time. We are now close to 8.5 billion and continues to grow at a rapid rate without any apprehensions. Is it right for us to take serious actions to it or should we look out at possible reasons and

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consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning

analyse

the situation of the society here. China had

this

theory of two

new borns

recently born

newborns

in a family and they have drastically been able to control the population, but the line has already been crossed and to be honest the world today is over populated and is

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a state of unstructured resource management.

Although

, restricting the number of children per couple would be

great but

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great, but

still there are a lot of remote areas where reaching out to monitor the situation would be impossible as the corruption and ill activities still remain active and passing a law hasn't been a favourable solution in most the cases, so I believe

this

would not be easy to control and monitor. There is famous saying in India which happens to be the

second

most populated and is thriving to reach the pinnacle of it that "When there is a

women

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woman

in a home she turns

The objective case of we, the persons speaking

into a house" metaphorically stating that a

women

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woman

is the pillar that runs a house and makes it feel like a happy place. Empowering women would be ideal as women will become

more aspirational

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more operationally

more operational

more inspirational

and not just be a toy for the men. But, how to achieve the nirvana in

this

male dominated society will

itself

the thing named or in question

be a challenge to top the existential crises that we are encountering. The men should be more open,

proctective

intended or adapted to afford protection of some kind

protective

, supportive and should understand and empathizes the hardships of a pregnancy and how much energy it drains out from a woman both physically and mentally. The situation

has been alarming

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is alarming

for decades now and but the reality is it will

takes

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take

a destiny to solve the crises and magic wand has already disappeared and the ideal world would take a superman or a

wondergirl

effort to solve

this

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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The world population is been increasing lately. One way to curb excessive growth in third world countries is to restrict the number of children each couple can have to 1. Other people believe that empowerment of the women is a better way. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

These days, many people in western countries are obese. What are the causes and solutions of this problem?

There are benefits to studying abroad, at least for part of one’s higher education. All students should try to include at least one year of a study-abroad program in their university or college education.

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.In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. .What are reasons for this? .How people can research this?