The world population is been increasing lately. One way to curb excessive growth in third world countries is to restrict the number of children each couple can have to 1. Other people believe that empowerment of the women is a better way. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
World population is one of the extreme conditions that our Earth is suffering from, pollution, corruption, natural calamities
our
something which we know is wrong and cannot be controlled the way we want to but given birth to a new individual is both a goodwill and a curse at the same time. We are now close to 8.5 billion and continues to grow at a rapid rate without any apprehensions. Is it right for us to take serious actions to it or should we look out at possible reasons and introduces an alternative
or
analyze
the situation of the society here.
China had consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
this
theory of two new borns
in a family and they have drastically been able to control the population, but the line has already been crossed and to be honest the world today is over populated and is recently born
newborns
at
a state of unstructured resource management.Suggestion
in
Although
, restricting the number of children per couple would be great but
still there are a lot of remote areas where reaching out to monitor the situation would be impossible as the corruption and ill activities still remain active and passing a law hasn't been a favourable solution in most the cases, so I believe Accept comma addition
great, but
this
would not be easy to control and monitor. There is famous saying in India which happens to be the second
most populated and is thriving to reach the pinnacle of it that "When there is a women
in a home she turns Suggestion
woman
is
into a house" metaphorically stating that a The objective case of we, the persons speaking
us
women
is the pillar that runs a house and makes it feel like a happy place.
Empowering women would be ideal as women will become Suggestion
woman
more aspirational
and not just be a toy for the men. But, how to achieve the nirvana in Suggestion
more operationally
more operational
more inspirational
this
male dominated society will itself
be a challenge to top the existential crises that we are encountering. The men should be more open, the thing named or in question
it
proctective
, supportive and should understand and empathizes the hardships of a pregnancy and how much energy it drains out from a woman both physically and mentally. The situation intended or adapted to afford protection of some kind
protective
has been alarming
for decades now and but the reality is it will Suggestion
is alarming
takes
a destiny to solve the crises and magic wand has already disappeared and the ideal world would take a superman or a Suggestion
take
wondergirl
effort to solve this
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