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The world population is been increasing lately. One way to curb excessive growth in third world countries is to restrict the number of children each couple can have to 1. Other people believe that empowerment of the women is a better way. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

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World population is one of the extreme conditions that our Earth is suffering from, pollution, corruption, natural calamities
our
introduces an alternative
or
 something which we know is wrong and cannot be controlled the way we want to but given birth to a new individual is both a goodwill and a curse at the same time. We are now close to 8.5 billion and continues to grow at a rapid rate without any apprehensions. Is it right for us to take serious actions to it or should we look out at possible reasons and
analyze
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
 the situation of the society here. China had
this
 theory of two
new borns
recently born
newborns
 in a family and they have drastically been able to control the population, but the line has already been crossed and to be honest the world today is over populated and is
at
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in
 a state of unstructured resource management.
Although
, restricting the number of children per couple would be
great but
Accept comma addition
great, but
 still there are a lot of remote areas where reaching out to monitor the situation would be impossible as the corruption and ill activities still remain active and passing a law hasn't been a favourable solution in most the cases, so I believe
this
 would not be easy to control and monitor. There is famous saying in India which happens to be the
second
 most populated and is thriving to reach the pinnacle of it that "When there is a
women
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woman
 in a home she turns
is
The objective case of we, the persons speaking
us
 into a house" metaphorically stating that a
women
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woman
 is the pillar that runs a house and makes it feel like a happy place. Empowering women would be ideal as women will become
more aspirational
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more operationally
more operational
more inspirational
 and not just be a toy for the men. But, how to achieve the nirvana in
this
 male dominated society will
itself
the thing named or in question
it
 be a challenge to top the existential crises that we are encountering. The men should be more open,
proctective
intended or adapted to afford protection of some kind
protective
, supportive and should understand and empathizes the hardships of a pregnancy and how much energy it drains out from a woman both physically and mentally. The situation
has been alarming
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is alarming
 for decades now and but the reality is it will
takes
Suggestion
take
 a destiny to solve the crises and magic wand has already disappeared and the ideal world would take a superman or a
wondergirl
 effort to solve
this
.

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