The bar graph below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six computer science subjects at a US university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar graph below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six computer science subjects at a US university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart gives the statistics of male and female
research
students
who studied six different computer science courses
in
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a university
at
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United
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States in 2011. (26)
Overall
, the
number
of male
students
was the highest in all the subjects except linguistics. In comparison,
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number
of male
research
students
studied psychology, natural sciences and mathematics in 2011.
While
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number
of male
research
students
(150) were enrolled in both engineering and programming.
Moreover
, those male
students
who studied linguistics were the least in figures, only 80.
On the other hand
, the proportion of female
research
students
was the highest for natural sciences.
This
figure declined to 175 for psychology and 125 for linguistics. For engineering and programming subjects, the
number
of female
students
was 90 and 80 respectively.
However
, only 40 females studied mathematics in 2011. (110) In conclusion, the
number
of male and female
research
students
fluctuated in all the computer science courses except natural sciences, for which
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number
of male and female
students
were registered in 2011. (33)
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