Rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach arts subjects, like philosophy, and history, and only offer practical degree courses that maximize chances of employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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the advancement of technology, people in today's era heading towards the new

innovation which

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innovation, which

attract more profits and less

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effort

. Rapid increase in university fees and corresponding less opportunities of employment for freshers leading people towards the thought that university should teach and offer only the practical courses which has maximum chances of getting

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a job

the job

rather than the

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courses. In my opinion,

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good

planning of

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courses can create the opportunities of the employment.

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and foremost, reason to support my statement is that the people living in one society should be aware of their nation’s

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and surrounding and through

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courses, they can have the knowledge about the

history

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like how their country's constitution is formed.

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For

instance, India has

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a rich history

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and culture and all

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information is present in curriculum in

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the form

of

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courses.

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the next generation

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can gain the knowledge about the nation.

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, Rich historical data

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attract

the tourism and helps to increase the economic growth of the nation.

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, different country has different

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.

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days people love travelling and explore the new nation. By maintaining the rich historical data one can easily attract tourists and

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will boost the economic growth. On the flip side, not maintaining the historical places or data leads to no or less knowledge about the

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of the place

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the new

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which

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head towards no interest in knowing the

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.

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, removing the course from the curriculum can attract the negativity of the people living in the society.

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Older

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might feel neglected which can

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lead to less tourism. To recapitulate,

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courses should be well planned so that they can attract the tourists which leads to economic growth and

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will create the employment opportunities for the

fresher

electric refrigerator (trade name Deepfreeze) in which food is frozen and stored for long periods of time

freezer

.

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, proper planning will help the

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to maintain the historical data for the

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human race.