You have recently been in a sports centre and noticed some issues in the changing rooms. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the centre and say – What was the problem? – Explain why it is bothering you. – Suggest a possible solution.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I feel the need to bring to your attention an issue I have with the manner other members use the changing room. Allow me to elaborate.

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week, after completing my swimming session at your sports

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, I came to use the changing rooms. I noticed that the wet towels have been placed all around the place like in locker doors, benches and even on

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. That day I had brought my children’s to use your sauna facilities and I am sure they felt bad about the cleanliness. I am aware that children are not your company's target market, but you have to acknowledge that children’s do visit your

sport

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center

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regularly along with their parents. I trust you can empathize with my situation.

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, I am expecting you to

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immediate action by installing

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at the entrance to keep the dirty clothes and display a notice to users about the purpose. I am

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expecting you to reprimand the staff's working

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changing room for allowing

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oversight to happen. Your timely attention to

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matter is needed, (I look forward to

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immediate action taken for

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issue) Gratefully yours, Sankar

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

196 words

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