Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views & give your own opinion.

“Parenting is the most difficult job on planet Earth.”, whoever said

this

it is very apt even in today’s

hi-Tech

resembling or making use of highly advanced technology or devices

high-tech

hectic

, super-fast and interconnected era. In fact, nowadays due to

wise range

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a wide range

a wise range

of opinions available everywhere parents are more confused about what is the best way or socially accepted way to raise their infants. The two major dilemmas parents having will be discussed in the essay. The

first

option for raising off springs which is verified and tested since long back is to encourage a child to take part in

organised group activity

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an organised group activity

organised group activities

the organised group activity

in their free time.

Organised group meeting

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The organised group meeting

An organised group meeting

Organised group meetings

could be a dance class, football class or a drama class for that matter. Participating in

such

activities

help

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helps

kids develop a social bond,

feeling

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feelings

a feeling

of empathy towards each other and team work. All these qualities are crucial for personal as well professional development of a person.

On the other hand

, some people are

of

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in

the thought process that parents should let their kids engage in things on their own. These self - involving activities are like painting, music, reading, poetry etc. By practising them, one would develop not only massive

creativity but

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creativity, but

a deeper connection with one’s self

also

. These

sort

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sorts

of activities

sooths

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soothe

soothes

your mind and rejuvenates your soul. During the difficult times

this

is your solid support system.

Hence

, I would suggest the key is balancing the both elements. Creating and developing a social bond is as important as developing with one’s self. Ability to work with teams can not replace the ability to think out of

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the box

. So, if you want to become a successful parent the answer

is strike

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has struck

is striking

strikes

a perfect balance between these two

mind

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minds

bouldering

a line that indicates a boundary

bordering

bothering

philosophies.