Rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach arts subject, like philosophy and history, and only offer practical degree courses that maximise chances of employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, universities has, rapidly, been raised up because of population and the universities are made for uneducated children and
also
universities offer subjects like philosophy and history and
also
deduct extra fund that, so here few
civilians says
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civilians, says
that universities need to teach only practical degree in order to secure the children's to pursue a nice career.
This
essay partially agrees with
this
statement. On
onehand
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one hand
, teaching practical degree like automobile engineering, mechanical engineering, nursing and
soon
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so on
has many opportunities to earn money,
for example
nursing,
nowdays
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
nursing has
best
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the best
opportunity to earn money in abroad countries like
United Kingdom
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the United Kingdom
, New Zealand and so on, and one of my sister is working as a nurse in London and she is earning a nice payment.
Moreover it
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Moreover, it
helps to increase the economy of a
country and
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country and it also
also
it benefits the people in that country.
In
addition practical
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addition, practical
degrees
also helps
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also help
unemployment because even if they didn't get any job in a multinational company
then
also
they can do the job by their own by building a clinic or shops.
Furthermore
, philosophy and history help the students to know about tradition, culture and past things that happened in their country
for instance
, most the of people in India learned about Mahatma Gandhi in their history class and philosophy has its own unique values and
also
it will teach how to speak to others and
thus
children will become an elegant person in future. In conclusion, it is clear that both subjects have its significance in various fields.

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