Rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach arts subject, like philosophy and history, and only offer practical degree courses that maximise chances of employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In recent years, universities has, rapidly, been raised up because of population and the universities are made for uneducated children and

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universities offer subjects like philosophy and history and

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deduct extra fund that, so here few

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that universities need to teach only practical degree in order to secure the children's to pursue a nice career.

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essay partially agrees with

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statement. On

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, teaching practical degree like automobile engineering, mechanical engineering, nursing and

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it benefits the people in that country.

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unemployment because even if they didn't get any job in a multinational company

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they can do the job by their own by building a clinic or shops.

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, philosophy and history help the students to know about tradition, culture and past things that happened in their country

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, most the of people in India learned about Mahatma Gandhi in their history class and philosophy has its own unique values and

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it will teach how to speak to others and

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children will become an elegant person in future. In conclusion, it is clear that both subjects have its significance in various fields.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach arts subject, like philosophy and history, and only offer practical degree courses that maximise chances of employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country , while others believe the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

: Some people think that Olympic games are exciting events that bring other nations together. Others say Olympics is a waste of money and the money could be better spent on other things. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people are now opting to provide technology companies with their personal data in exchange for access to software. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shipping. Is this a positive or a negative ?

University students always focus on one special subject but some people think university should encourage their students to study a range of subjects. To what extend do you agree or disagree?