Some people feel that entretainers such as film maker ; pop musicians or sport stars are paid to much money. Do you agree ot disagree ? which other type of job should be highly paid ?

Nowadays, it becomes common for a famous person to earn more than the normal range of salary of the country. I disagree because these people sell their image to brands,
such
as L’oreal and Dior. They help these companies
to make
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make
money. In
this
essay, I will discuss both parts of
this
question and give several reasons of my point-view.
First
of all, they advertise many logos. Generally, the main cause of their high salary is their international image.
This
one
is used by some brands,
such
as Coca-cola to sell their own products
in
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on
a bigger scale. These different companies
by
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from
selling their
articles earn
Accept comma addition
articles, earn
billion dollars. I believe that
this
is normal for the star to take a certain
rates
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rate
from
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of
their income. Demi
lovato
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Lovato
for example
, advertises every day goods that she received from different companies. Only
one
pictures
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picture
with
this
manufacture help the producer to sell an important quantity of it.
Thus
, fans who want to look like their
idole
a material effigy that is worshipped
idol
idols
are ready to buy everything.
Moreover
, famous people are currently considered like a Businessman.
In addition
to their
advertise
give heed (to)
adverts
for some industries. They sell their image through their own manufactured products.
It
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It's
become a current practice for a
stars
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star
.
For instance
, Selena Gomez starts to produce
derivated
formed or developed from something else; not original
derived
T-shirt and dolls, whereas Rihana has her own make-up brand.
This
is their major source of income.
However
, I am sure that people who work with them,
such
as their driver or hairdresser could have a more important salary, because it is in a part thanks to them that they are famous.
Therefore
, I think the reason of their enhance income is normal, they just used their name to
built
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build
their company in order to earn more. In conclusion,
although
famous people earn a lot. The main reasons are on the
one
hand, they help international industries to market their articles and
on the other hand
, they have their own business. For me, working
at
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on
an international scale does not have the same consequence than the national or local
one
.
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