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Letter number 110 Write a complaint letter to a moving company, let them know that they have damaged some of your furniture, tell them you’re not happy about the service and suggest a solution.

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Dear Sir, My name is Farrukh, I am a resident of garden housing society. I am writing
this
 letter to complain you about damaging household items by your workers while transferring from
house number 12 Block
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the house number 12 Block
 A to house no 13 Block C on
last
 Saturday. Let me explain it in detail. I asked your company to move my bed, dinning table and closet
to
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in
 my newly rented house. I offered you a good sum of money to ensure that all work will be done safely. Unfortunately, your workers broke one chair of dinning table and front mirror of a closet while moving items owing to their negligence.
In addition
, they were in a hurry to finish the required task, which is the main reason of
this
 incident. I would like to have a full compensation for all the damage that has been done by your employees. I would
also
 suggest you to issue a warning letter to all individuals who were involved, in order to warn them to take care
next
 time for other customers. Hoping for your prompt response regarding
this
 matter! Yours afffectionatelly, Farrukh maqsood
Submitted by farrukh.maqsood on

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