Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement? What other measures do you think might be effective?

There is no doubt that
traffic
and
pollution
from vehicles have become huge problems, both in cities and on motorways everywhere.
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
do not think it can be solved by increasing the
price
of
petrol
,
therefore
I disagree with the statements and I will discuss some other solutions that can be effective. It is not possible to solve growing
traffic
and
pollution
increasing the
price
of
petrol
.
it
Suggestion
It
will not impact to rich people.
the
Suggestion
The
people who have own
car it means
Suggestion
car, it means
they are rich.
it
Suggestion
It
may impact to the national
economy
Suggestion
economic
growth.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
it is not possible to solve growing
traffic
and
pollution
increasing the
price
of
petrol
. I support some effective measures to solve these problems
such
as
traffic
rules should be stronger. It should be controlled
strickly
restricted to something
strictly
and several effective
traffic
rule
Suggestion
rules
need to apply to control it.
second
Suggestion
Second
of all
traffic
rules
Suggestion
rule
breaker should get more strict punishment. In conclusin it is not possible to solve growing
traffic
and
pollution
by increasing the
price
of
petrol
and to stop it some other measures should be taken
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