Nowadays people make a new friends through social networks and internet chat groups. Some people think that this is good others think that face to face interaction is essential. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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high-tech era,

technology

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entered in each and every field and nowadays it becomes

trend

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trendy

to make new friends on social media like Facebook, Twitter

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Instagram, Snapchat and many more. Some people believe that make friends online is

good

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better

while others argue that physical

interaction

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is much better. My justification to the accredited task would be a fling to investigate both views in the light of positive and negative aspects associated with them. To trigger the debate from

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the perspective

a perspective

of people favouring the prior

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it can be associated that in today's world everyone is busy in the hustle and bustle of routine life

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of that they do not have enough time and they prefer social media to interact with their near and dear once.

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, we get aware of the new culture and tradition if we

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make, new

friends from overseas

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and any of the region without any worry. To exemplify, we can easily contact our kith and kind, if they live in abroad because we do not meet physically

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with

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that, due to

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the advancement

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, internet is available almost

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every

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place

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as cinema, cafe'

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restaurant etc.

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, one of the major

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drawbacks

of social media is

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profiled

, because only on the profile we did not generalise the right person and is the account legal or not? While considering probable consequences of people supporting the

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view

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it seems obvious to state that face-to-face

interaction

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is essential to make strong bond, to share emotions and enjoy memorable activity with each other.

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, face-to-face

conversation enhance

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conversation, enhance

our confidentiality and teach us team work

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, we spend quality time with our family at

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the farm house

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the complement

of games and barbecue the physical

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best choice

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the best choice

. As far as my

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is concerned.

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essay throws some light on the prior

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because

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the advancement

of the

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and due to enormous benefit we should

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cash in on

the social media.

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physical

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is not vanishing or

disappearing but

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disappearing, but

everyone wants to choose new sources. In conclusion, having discussed all the points.

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agree

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agrees

with the new aspects of

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technology we

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technology, we

should choose and take advantage of that

websites

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website

and know something new about other cultures, traditions and many more. Ergo, we should aware of the fake profile and a person who detrimental for us.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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Relevant & specific examples

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403 words

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