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Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from instead of travelling to a workplace every day. Dou you think advantages of working from outweigh the disadvantages?

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I think, it
depend
Suggestion
depends
 on our current situation. So, our position, our
work
 type etc.
For example
, you employee of a company, it’s important that what is your duties or daily workload.
Besides
, maybe you
work
 alone or your
work
depend
Suggestion
depends
 another departments. After
analyzing
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analysing
 these, we can share our opinion about going to a
workplace
 is better or not. Actually, I agree with
this
 approach that employees worked
instead
 of travelling to a
workplace
 every day. That’s
way
Suggestion
the way
 I need to write about
advantages
Suggestion
the advantages
 of
worked
Suggestion
working
work
 from
instead
 of travelling to a
workplace
 every day.
Firstly
, if we don’t go any
workplace
 every day, it
mean
Suggestion
means
 we can do everything nearly without losing a
time
. Now, I am showing some facts about it.
For example
, when we
needn’t go
Suggestion
didn’t go
did not go
are not going
aren’t going
 to
workplace
Suggestion
the workplace
, we don’t lose our
time
at
Suggestion
in
 traffic each morning and after
work
.
Also
, we can do our personal works comfortless and without any permission.
In addition
, we can do a lot of activities more than we did in
workplace
Suggestion
the workplace
,
also
 we can see less stress, which is in
workplace
 at working
time
 you can come face to face
this situations
Suggestion
this situation
these situations
 a lot.
Besides
, we can get fresh weather more than
workplace
Suggestion
the workplace
a workplace
, of
course if
Accept comma addition
course, if
workplace
 located in some closed building.
However
, we will not feel in a cage. All of
this
 our benefits about healthy life. In conclusion, we can manage our
time
 perfectly and we can do relax which
time
 we need. At least, I would like
add
Suggestion
to add
 one sentence that, of course it will be easy for you if you have enough profit without going
workplace
.
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