These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country.

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As moving between countries has become easier, the trend of study or working abroad has
increase
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increased
in the lately years. Even though
this
promises a
numbers
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number
of advantages, people
also
have to face some other disadvantage at the same times. For the advantages, the financial potential should be the most important. Generally people choose to work at anywhere that will pay them better, with
this
, they can support a whole family from their hometown.
Otherwise
, people tend to move from a developing country to a developed one for its advance improvements in all
aspect
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aspects
of life.
For example
, a family immigrates to the US or EURO will have access to is
health care system
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the health care system
, their children can enjoy a free and comprehensive education, which is worth all their effort to
going
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go
to a whole new country.
However
, there should be some advantages
such
as unfamiliar environments.
For example
not anyone is accustomed to the modern metro and bus system, it will take them a lot of time to transport around without their personal vehicle like in their hometown. Language is
also
a great barrier, with a newly learned language people can never express their full idea which can sometime cause many
serious
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seriously
misunderstood. To conclude, working an live anywhere is
difficult but
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difficult, but
people with strong mind will try to overcome as it has so many benefits.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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