Success is often measured in terms of how much money somebody has earned. Do you think wealth is a goo measure of success? How else could we measure whether somebody is successful or not

Money is an
economic
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economical
unit
that is
generally recognised. It can be measured in terms of the goods and services people afford depending on their
source
of
income
.
Good measure
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A good measure
of
success
can be seen in two
way
Suggestion
ways
, Financial and
Non financial
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Nonfinancial
, I think the not having money is a good way of categorized as a successful individual. On
other hand
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the other hand
, someone can itemize
success
as doing good deeds to others.
Firstly
, wealth might not be a good measure of
success
. Because not all rich persons are successful. Some of the richest non-challant attitude cannot control their resources or fame. An example is a recent advert seen in the newspaper of a helpless man that earns a high salary and suddenly lost all his
source
of
income
is currently hopeless and looking for all ends means to sustain his life.
Secondly
, there are other ways to identify whether a person is wealthy or not.
This
will be by showing some good deeds to the homeless and the needy.
This
method
portays
a hundred percent characteristic of the person and can easily be
identifed
having the identity known or established
identified
by the public.
On the other hand
, rich people do not solely depend on their
income
, but rather have other
source
of
income
that can sustain them and their unborn children.
For instance
a recent trend of a
philantropist
someone who makes charitable donations intended to increase human well-being
philanthropist
and lecturer man
beame
enter or assume a certain state or condition
became
been
so successful even without having enough
source
of
income
. In conclusion, while
success
might be measured to what most people earn.
This
might not be a means to become successful, but rather showing a helping
hands
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hand
to others can portray a successful person.
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