Write a letter to the manager of your local bus service. They have recently made some changes to the bus services which created inconveniences for you. In your letter, explain: Q) What are the changes? Q) What are the problems you are facing? Q) what part of the service would you like to change?

Dear Sir , I am writing
this
letter to inform you about the severe trouble caused due to the current change in the local bus service
timings
. Earlier, the bus used to arrive by around 7
am
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,
however
, now with the revised
timings
the bus arrives at around 6 am.
This
,
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has caused severe problems to the
staff
staying in the Sanabis area. The
timings
not taking into consideration the
convenence
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convenience
of the
staff
. Sadly, no communication nor prior notice was given.
Further
, in the early
mornings
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the winter cold is terrible and most of the
staff
end up with health issues frequently.
For instance
, the mornings are so dark and cold that one of our
staff
had an injury while stepping out of her home. Personally ,
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feel
this
change in
timings
to be unfair on the
staff
and
this
has terribly affected our productivity. As you are aware many countries adopt
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flexible timing during the winter season and
hence
, I request you to kindly reconsider
this
decision. Hoping for a positive response in
this
regard. Yours Faithfully
Jerin
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Sam Jose
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