Write a letter to the manager of your local bus service. They have recently made some changes to the bus services which created inconveniences for you. In your letter, explain: Q) What are the changes? Q) What are the problems you are facing? Q) what part of the service would you like to change?

Dear Sir , I am writing

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letter to inform you about the severe trouble caused due to the current change in the local bus service

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. Earlier, the bus used to arrive by around 7

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, now with the revised

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the bus arrives at around 6 am.

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has caused severe problems to the

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staying in the Sanabis area. The

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not taking into consideration the

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convenience

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. Sadly, no communication nor prior notice was given.

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, in the early

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the winter cold is terrible and most of the

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end up with health issues frequently.

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, the mornings are so dark and cold that one of our

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had an injury while stepping out of her home. Personally ,

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feel

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change in

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to be unfair on the

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has terribly affected our productivity. As you are aware many countries adopt

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flexible timing during the winter season and

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, I request you to kindly reconsider

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decision. Hoping for a positive response in

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regard. Yours Faithfully

Jerin

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Sam Jose