some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Other feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women. what is your opinion?

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Gender discrimination has become a pressing issue in recent years.
However
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, some individuals are of
opine
Suggestion
opinion
that males and females are equal and so women can do any vocation that they want. While others of
opinion
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the opinion
that they are not equal as men,
therefore
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they are unfit for certain jobs.
This
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essay will discuss both sides of
argument
Suggestion
the argument
arguments
and will give a plausible conclusion. On the one hand, some people believe that men and women are equal in all aspects, so that females can do any job they want. These individuals have
resons
a rational motive for a belief or action
reasons
reason
to believe that, as they have
same teritary degree
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a same tertiary degree
same tertiary degree
same territory degree
as men do and equally talented than their counterparts.
For example
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, many employees in global technology
comapanies
an institution created to conduct business
companies
such
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as Google
,
Accept space
,
Facebook are females who are highly paid when compared to men.
This
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depicts that women are nowhere lesser than men in terms of
hardwork
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hard work
and talent.
On the other hand
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, some are of
opine
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opinion
that men and women are not same, as females have low physical endurance when compared to their counterparts. Even though they
holds
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hold
a
higly
to a high degree or extent; favorably or with much respect
highly
educated degree, as they could not cope up with the jobs which require extreme physical strength to complete the task. In
this
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way many individuals are lacking behind than men.
For instance
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, many countries in
Middle East where
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the Middle East, where
the Middle East where
girls were not allowed to work in a construction department as they are
vulnerbale
susceptible to attack
vulnerable
to harsh conditions.
Although
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they are talented, they are unfit for some of the work which requires significant stamina. In conclusion, one section of humans
think
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thinks
that both genders are equal in all aspects so that women should be able to do any work on their wish while others oppose
this
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idea. In my opinion,
although
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most of the
femalas
an animal that produces gametes (ova) that can be fertilized by male gametes (spermatozoa)
females
formulas
are not physically built as men do,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
feel that they are unsuitable to some kind of jobs.

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