Eating too much of sugar is harmful for health. Some people think it is government's responsibility to limit people's sugar consumption while others think it is individual's responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Eating

sugar

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very much is not good for health. Majority of masses think that

government

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should limit the

amount

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of

sugar

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consumption

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consumed

while opponents believe that it is

individual's

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the individual's responsibility

an individual's responsibility

responsibility

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to eat less

amount

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of

sugar

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.

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an analytic or interpretive literary composition

essay

will discuss both contradictory arguments. I,

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, side with lateral view. There are some reasons why few people think that it is

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government

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a government responsibility

responsibility

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to

control

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the number

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the amount

of

sugar

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consumption

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and foremost reason is that the daily

consumption

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of

sugar

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is very high. To put it simply, due to increasing

amount

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of

sugar

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consumption

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, the price of

sugar

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is very

less

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less, therefore

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people eat

sugar

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to

to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits

too

much which leads many health problems like

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obesity. If

government

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control

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the

consumption

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of

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sugar

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sugar, then

then

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this

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problem might be solved. A survey which had been conducted in Australia in 2017 could be an ideal example of

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,

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survey showed almost 40% people

control

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their eating habit of

sugar

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when

government

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decreased the

amount

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of

sugar

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consumption

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and price of

sugar

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increased.

On the other hand

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, few people believe its individual

responsibility

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to

control

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their eating

habit

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habits

of

sugar

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. As a reason, a person can

control

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eating

sugar

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to

to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits

too

much because

sugar

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is not beneficial for health. A rich people can easily purchase

sugar

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according to own need because one cannot face any financial problem, and easily store

sugar

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in own factories. A

best

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good

illustration is that my uncle who is very rich person so who can easily purchase

sugar

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to

to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits

too

much and eat it. So it is

individual

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an individual responsibility

responsibility

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to

control

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eat

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eating

sugar

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because of its I'll effects. As

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such it

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such, it

can be concluded that

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government

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contol

power to direct or determine

control

the

consumption

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of

sugar

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, In my perspective,

individual

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individuals

an individual

the individual

can

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surpass in excellence

better

solve

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problem through

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control

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the control

on eating habit of

sugar

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.