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Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shop and restaurant.Why do you think people waste food? what can be done to reduce the amount they throw away?

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A significant amount of
food
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 has been wasted by people these days, which they purchased from stores or restaurants online or in person. I think the possible reason is they buy more than they need. The prudent solution would be raising
awareness
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 among people about the disadvantages to dispose of the
food
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 in the trash. According to many scientists
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a state of hunger disables the process of logical thinking by the human brain.
Therfore
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, they buy a significant amount of
food
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 beyond their stomach limit when they become hungry;
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 have easy access to it.
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, when a person is hungry and enters into KFC
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 due to the
food
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 aroma, he will buy two burgers
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 of
one
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. After eating
one
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 or maybe
one
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 and a half, will no more having a satiety feeling and can not able to finish all. In the end, the leftover will go to the dustbin. A rough estimate given by some researchers, the
food
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 is thrown in the garbage by the people in a single city
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in
 the USA in
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 hour will
fulfill
put in effect
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 the need of a hundred thousand people. The probable solution to prevent the
food
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 thrown into the garbage would be public
awareness
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. As we all know, the dramatic proliferation of media, particularly social media these days, can efficiently raise
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 about the drawbacks of
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 wastage.
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 as by starting a campaign,
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the media talks
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 and garbage disposal experts, who can sensitize people about the dilemma of starving children. When people realize that the
food
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 that they waste could be used to feed needy children, they will automatically want to find a way to avoid its wastage. In conclusion, I believe, the cause of
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 problem is unable to control hunger effectively and buy excessive
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. The solution would be public
awareness
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 by the media.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • over-purchasing
  • meal planning
  • expiration dates
  • portion sizes
  • food waste
  • abundance
  • affluence
  • mindfulness
  • environmental impact
  • ethical impact
  • food storage techniques
  • zero waste policies
  • home composting
  • community composting
  • food inventory tracking
  • spoilage
  • landfills
  • reusable
  • excessive consumption
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