Line graph of the radio and television audiences in UK during October to December 1992.

This
is a line graph demonstrating the audience’s
percentage
for
radio
and
television
in the UK between October to December 1992. The highest percent that can be reached is around 50% and the lowest is almost 0%. The
percentage
for
Suggestion
of
television
starts to grow greatly starting from 12 PM. The
time which
Accept comma addition
time, which
television
has the highest population is around 6:00 PM to 10:00 PM. The
percentage
during that time goes up to almost 50 % of the population of the UK. The
percentage
for
Suggestion
of
television
starts to drop dramatically starting from 9:00 PM.
On the contrary
, the highest
percentage
that
radio
reaches is close to 30 % from 7 to 9 in the morning. The decrease in
percentage
for
Suggestion
of
radio
starts from around 8:00 AM and goes down steadily as the day goes on. The two similarities that both
television
and
radio
have is
Suggestion
have been
were
that the lowest peak is around 2:00 AM to 6:00 AM and that they start to increase starting from 6:00 in the morning.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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