The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart depicts the comparison of buying and renting homes in two different countries from 1918 to 2011 over a period of 93 years. As an
overall
trend, the proportion of
households
in rented
accommodation
was greater than
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the percentage
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of
households
in owned
accommodation
during that time
whereas
the maximum percentage of
households
in owned
accommodation
was in 2001 and
ratio
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the ratio
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of citizens who leased houses remained
the
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meager
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. In 1918
households
in purchased
accommodation
was approximately 23%. It developed at almost 32% in 1939 and
then
remained constant until 1953. After
that
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it improved significantly from about 32% to 69 % between 1953 and 2001.
However
, it slightly dropped
at
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about 64% in 2011.
In contrast
, in the year 1918, the vast majority of England and Wales citizens
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chose to
living
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in rented homes with almost 78% of the population living in leased houses.
However
, a mildly rose was seen over the
last
10 years of around 36%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words households, accommodation with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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