The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart depicts the comparison of buying and renting homes in two different countries from 1918 to 2011 over a period of 93 years.
As an
overall
trend, the proportion of households
in rented accommodation
was greater than percentage
of Add an article
the percentage
a percentage
households
in owned accommodation
during that time whereas
the maximum percentage of households
in owned accommodation
was in 2001 and ratio
of citizens who leased houses remained Correct article usage
the ratio
the
Change the article
apply
meager
.
In 1918 Change the spelling
meagre
households
in purchased accommodation
was approximately 23%. It developed at almost 32% in 1939 and then
remained constant until 1953. After that
it improved significantly from about 32% to 69 % between 1953 and 2001. Add a comma
,that
However
, it slightly dropped at
about 64% in 2011.
Change preposition
to
In contrast
, in the year 1918, the vast majority of England and Wales citizens that
chose to Correct pronoun usage
apply
living
in rented homes with almost 78% of the population living in leased houses. Change the verb form
live
However
, a mildly rose was seen over the last
10 years of around 36%.Submitted by n.kaur48 on
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