The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph displays the
proportion
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of owned and leased houses in the UK and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
Overall
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, the
proportion
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of households owning their accommodation increased
while
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the
percentage
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of rented houses decreased.
According to
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the data, the majority of households (78%) in England and Wales lived in rented houses in 1918. The
percentage
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of rented accommodation fell over the
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few decades and by 1971 there was an equal
proportion
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of owned and rented accommodation. After 1971, the
percentage
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of families owning their
homes
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increased gradually until 2001. There was a 10% increase in the
proportion
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of families owning their
homes
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from 1971 to 1981. It continued to rise over the following years and by 2001, about 70% of the households were living in their own
homes
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. Over the
next
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10 years,
however
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, the
percentage
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of owned
homes
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decreased slightly and the
percentage
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of rented
homes
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increased.
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