The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph displays the
proportion
of owned and leased houses in the UK and Wales from 1918 to 2011. Overall
, the proportion
of households owning their accommodation increased while
the percentage
of rented houses decreased. According to
the data, the majority of households (78%) in England and Wales lived in rented houses in 1918. The percentage
of rented accommodation fell over the next
few decades and by 1971 there was an equal proportion
of owned and rented accommodation. After 1971, the percentage
of families owning their homes
increased gradually until 2001. There was a 10% increase in the proportion
of families owning their homes
from 1971 to 1981. It continued to rise over the following years and by 2001, about 70% of the households were living in their own homes
. Over the next
10 years, however
, the percentage
of owned homes
decreased slightly and the percentage
of rented homes
increased.Submitted by n.kaur48 on
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