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Eating too much sugar is harmful for our health. Some people think that it is a government responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption, while others think that it is an individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#sugar #health #people #government #responsibility #limit #people’s #consumption #individual’s #amount
Eating
two
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
 much of sugar
difnetly
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
 it's harm for our
health
. We can
readue
interpret something that is written or printed
read
ride
reduce
 the problem in two ways by individual or following
government
 restrictions.
Firstly discuss
Accept comma addition
Firstly, discuss
 about
government
 restrictions, we follow the
rules it's
Accept comma addition
rules, it's
 cure our
health
Accept comma addition
health, for
for example
 country like Indian
government
 has more rules, people's must follow their rules and control the
health
 and some other countries they didn't follow the rules
on
Suggestion
of
at
 that time we choose another way
Secondly
 we talk about
individuals
Suggestion
individual
 suggestions we contact our near by Best Doctor and take precautions
for
Suggestion
to
 cure,
for example
 in
this
 method we have individual care. More benefits compare to the
government
 I conclude that we can protect our
health
 in both ways my request is choose individual care. If
government
 care is good we move on no problem.
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