chart shows the weekly leisure time spent in hours by men and women under different employment status in year 1998-99
The chart shows the weekly
leisure
time
spent in hours
by men
and women
under different employment
status
in Fix the agreement mistake
statuses
Change the article
the year
year
1998-99.
Both the unemployed and retired Fix the agreement mistake
years
men
and women
spend the
large chunk of their Correct article usage
a
time
in leisure
among all the different employment
status
. In both these categories, Fix the agreement mistake
statuses
men
still spend more leisure
time
around 85 hours
per week which is 10 hours
more than the
Correct article usage
apply
women
. Overall
, men
leads
Change the verb form
lead
women
in leisure
time
spend
among all the Change the form of the verb
spent
employment
categories.
It can also
be noticed that no men
is
interested in Change the verb form
are
the
part-Correct article usage
apply
time
jobs and in the housewives
role. Only Change the noun form
housewife
women
can be found in these employment
statuses. Housewives women
typically spend around 50 hours
leisure
Change preposition
of leisure
time
per week whereas
the
part-Correct article usage
apply
time
employed women
spend around 40 hours
of their time
in leisure
.
Full-time
employed men
and women
spend the least time
in leisure
weekly compared to all other employment
statuses. Men
still in this
category manage to spend more leisure
time
compared to the women
which is
around 45 Change the verb form
are
hours
, 10 hours
more than the women
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