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people living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. what are those problems? should the goverment encourage people to move to regional town? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge

#people #cities #face #life #goverment #move #town
In
this
 era of advancement in almost each and every aspect
,
Accept space
,
living a better
life
 with improved facilities has forced people to drag themselves to metro- cities.
However
, along with betterment of
life
, comes the difficulties that of a large
city
. In my opinion, encouraging mass to move to regional town is a good idea provided the town is developed enough to lead a
life
 as good as a permeated area. To start with, large cities
has
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have
 a larger area which often has scattered opportunities which makes job seekers travel far and wide making it difficult for one to take
time
 for personal health care. Timely food, exercise and stress free sleep is too good to reality.
For Example
, a
city
 like Mumbai which is often named as the economic capital of India, is extensively scattered and a person needs to a minimum travel
time
 of 3 hrs each day to and fro office
to
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at
 home. Long working hours, pressure of deadline and other commitments makes it impossible to take care of health resulting in physical problems in
long run
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the long run
. Often children are neglected in urge to cope up with the expenses of the
life
 style a large
city
 attracts a person to. High maintenance, great living style, better transportation are some facts that
majority
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the majority
 has which makes every individual in a family to work.
This
 results in isolation of a kid from his/her parents due to lack of
time
. A clear
instance can
Accept comma addition
instance, can
 be a family which has bother husband and wife working cannot concentrate on their child a result of short of
time
. It is a good Idea to encourage groups to live in regional towns, but better education and quality of
life
 is
also
 a priority of
majority
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the majority
a majority
 of parents which are backlogs of towns. Apart from these limited opportunities should
also
created
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create
. Improvising on these significant aspects can make generation stop themselves from migration. In Conclusion to the subject, I would opine that health issues and negligence on children are some of the issues people face in leading a
life
 in
city
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the city
a city
cities
 and that better availability of education and job opportunities would provide a back hand to
government
Suggestion
the government
 to
encourge
contribute to the progress or growth of
encourage
 regional living.
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