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Some people believe that the fast pace and stress of modern life is having a negative effect on families. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is currently a contentious argument over
whetherfamily
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whether family
life
 is being harmed by the high-speed and pressure of contemporary lifestyles. I totally agree with
this
 opinion because the fast pace leads to less
time
 for families to be together, and stress leads to arguments
among
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between
 family members. The main reason why I believe family
life
 is being compromised is because families have less
time
 to be with each other.
This
 is due to family members being busier at work and with their social lives. As well as
this
, people have many things they have to do these days
such
 as checking
e-mail
(computer science) a system of world-wide electronic communication in which a computer user can compose a message at one terminal that can be regenerated at the recipient's terminal when the recipient logs in
email
, updating their online social status and so less
time
 is left for family
life
. To illustrate, I spend about two hours online every night attending to daily correspondence before
chatting
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Chatting
 with my family members, whereas ten years ago I would spend
time
 with my family as soon as I walked in the door. Another reason why I support the notion that families are being impacted negatively is that the pressure of
life
 these days means that even when families do get together arguments are more likely.
This
 is because everyone feels tired and they are more likely to
get irritated and to
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get irritated and
 react to their heightened emotional levels. In conclusion, I completely agree that the rapid pace and stressful nature of contemporary lifestyles are having negative consequences on family relationships.
This
 is because family members have less
time
, and when they are together they feel less relaxed. Given
this
 situation, it seems that family members should try to be more supportive
to
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of
 one another and
also parents need to
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parents also need to
 set aside regular times for families to relax together.
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