Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and government should encourage businesses to move from cities to rural areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
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the problem
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to move businesses from big cities to country sides. spontaneously derived from or prompted by a natural tendency
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do not
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Consequently
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of metro cities should be Suggestion
the accomodation problem
accomodation problems
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to Suggestion
restrained
great extent
. Suggestion
a great extent
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not only help the people to get a city in north central India
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job
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jobs
also
reduce the level of pollution in delhi
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Delhi
However
, it may arise problems for organistations
as cost of the persons (or committees or departments etc.) who make up a body for the purpose of administering something
organisations
adminstration
cost has been drastically increased while setting a method of tending to or managing the affairs of a some group of people (especially the group's business affairs)
administration
bussiness
in rural areas because they need to set their offices both in cities and rural area in order to compete demands of customers. a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
businesses
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rises
send
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sends
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units and finish product being one more than one
two
tranfer
to transfer somebody to a different position or location of work
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wharehouses
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the warehouse
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a warehouse
also
required more personnel for handling this
process.
To conclude, government
should setting business units in rural parts of countries so that cities are free from huge traffic and Suggestion
the government
accomdation
problems.making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
accommodation
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