Some people think it is a good thing for senior managers to have much higher salaries than the other workers in a company. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that senior managers play a vital role in the company’s management so as to achieve targets.
While
some believe that Linking Words
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high-level holders should be paid handsome salaries as compared to junior workers, I, Linking Words
however
, agree with Linking Words
this
thought for two reasons.
One concern in terms of higher salaries is Linking Words
an
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apply
experience
. Senior executives play an integral role in Use synonyms
upbringing
firm’s future. Only workers who have Correct article usage
the upbringing
long term
work Add a hyphen
long-term
experience
are to be paid Use synonyms
the
decent salaries as they know management’s input and output very well. Correct article usage
apply
For example
, a survey shows that 85% of Linking Words
a
senior Correct article usage
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employee
who worked in the same organization Fix the agreement mistake
employees
are
succeeded in Unnecessary verb
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gaining
the company’s goal Verb problem
achieving
due to
acknowledging the firm’s tic-tack. Linking Words
Therefore
, usually, they are mostly high paid employees than others.
Responsibility is another area. The senior executive position demands a great number of responsibilities to deal with. Linking Words
For instance
, a branch manager has to look for the entire operation of the branch, Linking Words
whereas
, a Linking Words
junior level
employee only needs to take care of their respective job. Add a hyphen
junior-level
Similarly
, a customer care executive Linking Words
only
responsible for answering the Add a missing verb
is only
query
of customers, Fix the agreement mistake
queries
while
marketing managers have to answer why a product fails in the market to the board of management.
In conclusion, not only do senior managers deserve higher remuneration than juniors because of valuable work Linking Words
experience
, but Use synonyms
also
they have dealt with enough job responsibilities Linking Words
for achieving
the objective of companies. Change preposition
to achieve
Therefore
, I strongly believe that they should pay much than a fresh Linking Words
Use synonyms
experience
employee.Replace the word
experienced
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coherence and cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are present, but the essay lacks clear and comprehensive ideas supported with relevant specific examples.