Some people believe the government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Traffic

is an increasing

problem

these days people may stay hours on the road just to get to

thier

of them or themselves

their

homes

,

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,

while some

poeple

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

think that the government should act with

buliding

a structure that has a roof and walls and stands more or less permanently in one place

building

wider

raods

a partly sheltered anchorage

roads

others; think

its

it is

it's

better to invest in better public

transportion

a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods

transportation

system

,

this

essay will discuss why

buliding

a structure that has a roof and walls and stands more or less permanently in one place

building

wider roads are good but why constructing trains and subway lines are ultimately

suprior

of high or superior quality or performance

superior

.

Traffic

is modern

problem

for

governmnents

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

governments

government

since back in the day people did not own

alot

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a lot

of cars

,

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,

so with

this

problem

becoming more and more severe people are more persistent for asking governments for wider roads to solve

this

issue example for how

this

probelm

a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved

problem

is

effecting

arousing affect

affecting

people a

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people, a

study was conducted in

jordan

a river in Palestine that empties into the Dead Sea; John the Baptist baptized Jesus in the Jordan

Jordan

on how much an

avrage

approximating the statistical norm or average or expected value

average

person spends time in

traffic

daily the results was that

everyday

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every day

a

avrage

approximating the statistical norm or average or expected value

average

citizen spends 1 hours of his day in

traffic

in Amman, so solving

this

problem

is crucial to satisfy the community of

this

country and many others. Building train and subway was the

frist

preceding all others in time or space or degree

first

line of action in many developed countries to solve

this

problem

, while

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

think that wide roads are important; building an

affordable easy

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affordable, easy

transportaion

a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods

transportation

system

is far better for all people since its always cheaper and more convenient to the whole

population

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population, for

for example

a

countery

a politically organized body of people under a single government

country

counter

like turkey who's got a good

transportion

a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods

transportation

system

has decreased

thier

of them or themselves

their

there

traffic

density by 50% since building

thier

of them or themselves

their

transportion

a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods

transportation

system

, since

then

thier

of them or themselves

their

there

Thor

economy thrived and now can hold

alot

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a lot

of tourists without having to worry about the

traffic

. One of most leading problems in big cities right now is

traffic

so solving it would in fact solve most of the issues that comes with living in

big city

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a big city

the big city

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

think that a good subway line that connects the whole city is crucial for the people to prosper in doing

thier

of them or themselves

their

daily

activites

any specific behavior

activities

.