you work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job write a letter to the shop or compsny which supplied the equipment

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work
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as a human resource manager and
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do all my
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at home,
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months ago
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neede
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need
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my all
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files
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brought sony 100
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from your store at
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street in may,
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was really happy to use
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until
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yesterday morning
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started to use
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files
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from
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but was
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long and at
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it stucked
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tried
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on and off but still
couldnt
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couldn't
open
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had so much
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that should have finished yesterday and
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all my meeting appointments
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was in that but all got cancelled because
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coudnt
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couldn't
see the timing and places yesterday afternoon,
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called
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your customer care but they explained that
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have to
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for 3 working days
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have any urgent matters in
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so
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cudnt
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couldn't
wait to fix that so long
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had a
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guarantee
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have a request to fix
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and recover all my
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by today
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beloieve
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believe
that your company is good so
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am waiting for
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friendly service as soon as possible thanks & regards.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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