You recently broke your leg and your colleagues from work sent you get well cards and presents. Write a letter to them and say • Thanks them for supporting you. • Describe how you spend your time. • Explain about your recovery process.

Dear Taposh, Thank you for your nice gifts and greeting cards. It was surprising to me to receive the gifts and to see the
well wished
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you have written in the cards because I didn’t inform the incident
to
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you
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. It is a pleasure for me that my office is remembering me, praying for me. I think your
well
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wishes will help me to get recovered soon. It was a holiday and I was walking on the
roof
reading newspaper. The
roof
was extremely wet due to heavy
raining
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over the
last
night and I was very involved in reading. Somewhere on my
reading
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I was so unmindful that I had not kept myself stand on the
roof
and slipped very badly. It was a terrible accident and the most frightening matter is that the
roof
has no railing in its boundary but thanks to God for narrow escape. The accident was very frustrating to me. Not only my right leg has broken but my
right hand
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wrist
also
fractured. I was
got
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admitted to
hospital
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for 2 days. Now I am at my home. My wife
is now looks
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after me. It is a very dull and tedious time I am spending now. At
first
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I didn’t walk even an inch without the help of others but now I can walk slowly by myself. It has passed almost one month after that bad incident.
Doctor
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told me that it will take almost 2 and
half
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months to get recovered fully. My leg and my wrist are still rapped with
bandage
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and it will be removed after 2 months from the date of bandage. He prescribed me lots of medicine which I am taking regularly. In the
meantime
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doctor advised me to do some physiotherapy which I am doing
with
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regular
interval
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. I wish I can attend office from the
first
day of February of the
next
year. I have already applied for
extension
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of my medical leave explaining the whole reasons. Thank you again for your kind attention
on
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me. Please inform my present condition to my boss and request him to keep his prayer with me. I am very eager to join at work as soon as I recovered. Kind regards, Sajib

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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