You recently broke your leg and your colleagues from work sent you get well cards and presents. Write a letter to them and say • Thanks them for supporting you. • Describe how you spend your time. • Explain about your recovery process.
Dear Taposh,
Thank you for your nice gifts and greeting cards. It was surprising to me to receive the gifts and to see the
well wished
you have written in the cards because I didn’t inform the incident Add a hyphen
well-wished
to
Change preposition
apply
you
. It is a pleasure for me that my office is remembering me, praying for me. I think your Correct pronoun usage
apply
well
wishes will help me to get recovered soon.
It was a holiday and I was walking on the Change the adverb
good
roof
reading newspaper. The roof
was extremely wet due to heavy raining
over the Replace the word
rain
last
night and I was very involved in reading. Somewhere on my reading
I was so unmindful that I had not kept myself stand on the Add a comma
,reading
roof
and slipped very badly. It was a terrible accident and the most frightening matter is that the roof
has no railing in its boundary but thanks to God for narrow escape. The accident was very frustrating to me. Not only my right leg has broken but my right hand
wrist Add a hyphen
right-hand
also
fractured. I was got
admitted to Change the form of the verb
getting
hospital
for 2 days. Now I am at my home. My wife Correct article usage
the hospital
is now looks
after me. It is a very dull and tedious time I am spending now. At Change the verb form
is now looking
first
I didn’t walk even an inch without the help of others but now I can walk slowly by myself.
It has passed almost one month after that bad incident. Add a comma
,first
Doctor
told me that it will take almost 2 and Add an article
The doctor
half
months to get recovered fully. My leg and my wrist are still rapped with Correct article usage
a half
bandage
and it will be removed after 2 months from the date of bandage. He prescribed me lots of medicine which I am taking regularly. In the Add an article
a bandage
meantime
doctor advised me to do some physiotherapy which I am doing Add a comma
,meantime
with
regular Change preposition
at
interval
. I wish I can attend office from the Fix the agreement mistake
intervals
first
day of February of the next
year. I have already applied for extension
of my medical leave explaining the whole reasons.
Thank you again for your kind attention Add an article
an extension
on
me. Please inform my present condition to my boss and request him to keep his prayer with me. I am very eager to join at work as soon as I recovered.
Kind regards,
SajibChange preposition
to
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
