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The tradition of families getting together to eat meals is disapearing. What are the reasons?What are the impact?

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It is true that recent years communication between family
membeers
one of the persons who compose a social group (especially individuals who have joined and participate in a group organization)
members
 has faded. There are several reasons that have influenced on relationship in families. There are many proofs to influence on family communications nowadays.
Firstly
, making
possibility
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possibly
 working outside of home for women
some times
on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
makes
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make
 family away from each others and they do not able to have meals together.
Secondly
, technology makes
virtual relationship
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virtual relationships
a virtual relationship
 between people.
For example
, many young people choose to make friends online and they prefer to spend their time with new online friends
instead
 of family members.
Finally
, some young members of
family
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the family
families
 choose to live alone and want to be an independent, so it separates the family from each other. I think there are both positive and negative
impact
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impacts
 on families. On one hand, having
job
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jobs
 for all family members helps the family economy and they can gather
to gether
in contact with each other or in proximity
together
 one or two days in a week
instead
 of
whole week
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the whole week
a whole week
 for having dinner.
Furthermore
, when the members of
family
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the family
a family
 are away from each other they have
alot
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a lot
 of things to
tell
express in words
say
 to each other and it
make
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makes
 a memorable time for them.
On the other hand
, nowadays, we see some families
notwithstanding are
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notwithstanding, being
notwithstanding being
 together in a home but it just a physical presence. In many cases, unfortunately, internet has a negative effect on
relationship
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the relationship
relationships
 between members of
family
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a family
the family
 specially
on
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for
 young members. In conclusion, I think that it is unrealistic to expect family members stay
to gether
in contact with each other or in proximity
together
for ever
for a limitless time
forever
. But they can gather
somedays
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some days
 in a week and make memorable times for others of their family.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • coordinating
  • preoccupied
  • emphasis
  • traditional gatherings
  • flexibility
  • spontaneity
  • structured
  • generational changes
  • family bonds
  • communication
  • problem-solving
  • eating habits
  • balanced diet
  • cultural traditions
  • communal
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